Monday, October 09, 2006
{A Terrible Holiday}
Almost a week ago, I went to my Grandmothers house "Lola". She, lives in Arizona.When I have to go to her house,(1)I have to go by air plane, by car, or by train. These time I had to go by car with my mom and we almost didn't got there. The car was falling apart. We had to spend a night in a hotel. It was disgusting. (2.)The bathroom was below a stair, the room didn't had air conditioner, and the bed was very uncomfortable. Finally we got there. When I enter the house, there were a bunch of animals. (3.)In the house, were twenty cats, two parrots, an aquarium, and one snake. Can you imagine all the cats trying to eat the fishes? That was a disaster! I allways have to clean up the poop of each of them.
(4.) While I was waiting for dinner, I was reading a book, combing my hair, and looking at the fishes.
(5.) Lola is a homemade. She, cleans the house, she bakes, she sows and takes care of her animals. I couldn´t do anything.Either couldn´t watch T.V., the only thing I did was to read or help her with the house.What I liked about going to Lolas house is that her neighbor is a friend of my.I go and pass some time with her. We talked about cute guys and played cards and see T.V.
(6.)The next morning, I had to wake up at 5:00 A.M, Lola and I were going to do some exercise. When we got back I was exausted.(7.)I went up stairs to take a bath, the water was freezing!
(8.)Yes, I finally get out of the house my mom was waiting outside for me. All the animals were trying to pull me and not letting me jump into to the car. At least I got home on time to finish my homework.
1.series of phrases
2.introductory of prepositional phrase
3.series of objects
4.series of modifiers
5.introductory of participial phrase
6.introductory of independent clauses
7.introductory of adverb clause
8.introductory of yes, no and intejections
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